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Dissection of Mimi

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Her fingers drumming out
An impatient tune

She will not wait
For you


Your ignorance apparent
In the eyes of the moon

She finds it
Appalling


Her mouth says words
You need not hear

She thinks it is
Shameful


Her body dances
To music she fears

She has conspired
Alone


Your strength she sees
As only dust

She blows it
Away

Her hands clinched tight
Struggle is a must

She cannot begin
Believing


Your trust you gave
To yesterday

She finds you
Transparent

You’re not to understand
Fight as you may

She is only
A memory
Have you missed her? She has been having a rather tumultuous affair with prose lately. But she decided to grace me with a bit of rhythm today.

I actually like this one in particular, for the fact that it is unconventional. It has some pattern to it, but it steps out of the box, or so I think..
Anyway, hope you enjoy, my dears. Goodness knows when she will be back.

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artistic-poet's avatar
Eeh.. I feel like I've just been stripped down to nothing by the force of Mimi's glare.

That was a powerful poem to read.