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Transcending Time Pg 2
Step into a new world, a realm of magic, monsters and destiny, where time is just an
illusion and where your heart is always right. The person who had saved Yugi was the
Pharaoh, who had been waiting for Yugi to put the puzzle together.
5000 years ago, in the times of Pharaohs and wars that lasted more than a lifetimes,
one Pharaoh found a way to stop the impeding evil from annihilating the world as we
know it. He was young, and was only on the throne for no more than a week, when
his kingdom was threatened by this evil. He had to make a great sacrifice to insure the
future of mankind, and doing so, lost himself to a world of no light
Literature
Out of Time
Shrine steps swept, stone basin filled for visitors to perform the Misogi Harai, golden eyes swept over the shrine for any uncompleted task. Finding none, they rolled heavenward, a bored sigh escaping lips. Four long years had passed since he had decided to stay with
her. Three years,three hundred and sixty four days exactly since he had discovered that the well was closed.
Out of place, in a time he had difficulty understanding and probably never would, head filled with sounds that grated on sensitive hearing and artificial smells that overpowered him. Yet, it was as much home as where, no when, he had come from. He had always been out of
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Please note that this story does contain mild homosexual tones. Nothing graphic, but if you feel uncomfortable about reading such subjects, please turn around now and head the other way. I will not except flames, insults or damns- with-faint- praise of any kind. Thank you.
This was written as a gift for the darling *StephethxLoser whom I adore. We had a conversation once that if she wrote something hetro relationship wise, I would try my hand at something not. This piece bloomed from that, and has taken me months to complete. Honestly, I really like it, for the emotional aspect. I hope if comes across as touching. Enjoy, those who read.
I am open for critiques. But all the warnings apply to that as well.. no flames, no insults. I'm not forcing you to read my work after all.
Photo for lit tag by me.
This was written as a gift for the darling *StephethxLoser whom I adore. We had a conversation once that if she wrote something hetro relationship wise, I would try my hand at something not. This piece bloomed from that, and has taken me months to complete. Honestly, I really like it, for the emotional aspect. I hope if comes across as touching. Enjoy, those who read.
I am open for critiques. But all the warnings apply to that as well.. no flames, no insults. I'm not forcing you to read my work after all.
Photo for lit tag by me.
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I really liked this story. It is a bit depressing and exists in a sort of a dream world. I suppose, the main character is a dreamer and we see the happenings through his eyes. His personality is well defined, although I know nothing about his name or appearance. I know none of those things about the professor either, which leaves some blanks in the overall well defined picture.
I was surprised at the vomiting scene and the conversation. It happened way fast and seemed as if the student boy had recognized the illness too fast and was accepting this way too calmly. I'd expect the first reaction to be 'food poisoning', not 'how long have you known'.
The story is touching for sure, I only wish it was longer.